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The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it. this days we have a lot of information to know about out world and all the news but in the other hand the big bang of information is a bad thing for the reason is that we spend quantity of time to read most of information that only waster time but without any useful knowledge.So the way that we have a use of life is tantamount to spend it for something that will outlast it is to have a reasonable speed of our time.First of all, we have a first principle to the use of life is to keep away from rubbish information because if you save the time that you browser social software you will find that it is a lot time spent and you have nothing to know.The second principle of the use of life is tantamount to learn something of an area that you interesting.If you do love something and learn it deeply you will readly promise an especial of this area.
