2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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My hometown is very beautiful, i will show a mountain to my friend.because it is the system of my hometown .maybe you have see a book named "xi you ji ",in there have say the "hua guo shan" is the mohome , in fact my home very large ,it is the start of the sea which cont the eouple and arish