2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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If one of my foreign friends is going to Guiyang,my hometown,I'd like to take her to enjoy the most amazing resorts of my hometown. First of all,my hometown is famous for it's climate,so i will advise her to come in summer for the temperature won't be too high. Secondly,many exotic features are attracting many foreigners,you may heard of many famous resorts before,for example,you may heard Huangguoshu falls before and you may heard Maotai before.