2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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One of the most frequently communicate equipment is cell phone,it is necessary in people's life,no matter where you are live,it has already accupied part of your life,each person has their own phone,some of them even have a couple of phones obviously,now the cell phone becomes more and more ordinary, for the economic development is faster,its function become more and more complete,it takes a lot of convenience and benefit for ours life,you can use it consult the map,use it reading、Shopping、Listen to music、Play games、Reserve hotel or ticket etc,maybe it likes your friend or your companion,we can't leave it,for we depend it more and more serious,so we no sooner have spare time than see our cell phone,even some of our are crossing the street looking at their cell phone either,that is very dangerous ,it will cause some bad consequence ,even lost their life. to sum up,we should correct use our cell phone and don't extreme use it,because it will harm our eyes.