英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 留学> 雅思> 真题> 2013年5月25日雅思大作文真题TASK2附范文:政府资金支持艺术

2013年5月25日雅思大作文真题TASK2附范文:政府资金支持艺术

发布时间:2013-06-08 00:13浏览次数:2274
要求:
Government money should support more important things rather than artists.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
写作思路
第一段:引入话题,艺术是否该获得政府资金支持
第二段:科学研究与社会服务当然可以明显地提高人民的生活水平,如科技,教育,医疗。但是这些只能满足人们的物质需求。
第三段:政府需要投资艺术,因为:
1. 人类有多重的需求,艺术是表达感情和思想的渠道,原始社会就有艺术形式的存在。艺术不活跃,导致思想僵化,科技和经济发展迟滞。高度文明的社会总是伴随着繁荣的文化和艺术
2. 艺术和文化有地域特点,是国家团结的一个纽带
3. 艺术提供看世界的多重视角,培养人的创造和创新能力
第四段:政府应该既投资社会基础服务,也投资艺术。这样才能创造一个健康有生机的社会.
用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
评语:

能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文章词汇表达丰富,不过拼写检查还需加强;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

No one denies that the government should support the development of the economy and politics but it is really in heated dissucssion on whether the government has the responsibility to give financial support on art. For this issue, I hold that it is the administration's obligation to fund it. To start with, financial support on either sicentific research or the social service can do good to the improvement of people's life quality, such as the the fileds in technology, education, medical servicea and so on. Hoewever, these can only meet the material needs of the citizens. In this case, the money for art is a good way to rich people's spiritual life. Furthermore, there are many reasons for the financial support for the artist. Firs of all, while people's needs are multi-leveled, art used to be and is still one excellent way to express our thought and emotion. To be specific, art existed from the very ancient society and the failure of the culture to be active would cause the death of thought,which would directly lead to the slow development of the technology and economy. This is quite disastrous as we all know that the highly civilized society always goes with the prosperous culture and art. What's more, all the art and culture has their own regional character, so they are usually a bandage for the state union. Last but not the least, art can provide us a delicate and multiple angle to view the world as well as fostering us the capability to creat and inniate. All in all, the government should both invest in the social fundamental service and pay financial support to art. As only in this case, can a healthy and lively society be founded. Therefore, we citizens shall live happily and peacefully.

会员评论0个评论)
469972335
金币:2

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:93.0jamesapple1

人气:198发布:2013-06-17

得分:92.0arieslv@126.com

人气:87发布:2014-06-10

得分:91.0catfish2222

人气:80发布:2013-08-15

得分:90.5winghty

人气:155发布:2013-07-02

得分:90.01435317957

人气:73发布:2013-09-19