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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4565
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
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1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
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可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;请注意文中用词的丰富度以及单词拼写,学术词汇的希望能更熟练一些文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

With the development of the technology,the computer internet become more and more popular in people's life.People begin to contact with each other on the internet instead of communicating face to face.However,everything has two facts.There are many reasons account for this. People contact on the Internet decrese the time that waste on the road in order to do many other things.Also,if you have to take a long way to meet someone ,you may save the traffic cost .However ,with the Internet,you can't find your friend's mood and expression and it will affect your communication with your friends.More seriously ,you may be increasingly lazy in going out making your health became more and more poor.Also ,if your eye face with the computer for a long time,you may wear giasses in the future. As a student ,wo should opposse a correct attitude to the impact of Internet on interpersonal commmunication.We should actively use the convenience of the Internet ,and meanwhile take care for its disadvantage.

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