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With the development of the technology,the computer internet become more and more popular in people's life.People begin to contact with each other on the internet instead of communicating face to face.However,everything has two facts.There are many reasons account for this. People contact on the Internet decrese the time that waste on the road in order to do many other things.Also,if you have to take a long way to meet someone ,you may save the traffic cost .However ,with the Internet,you can't find your friend's mood and expression and it will affect your communication with your friends.More seriously ,you may be increasingly lazy in going out making your health became more and more poor.Also ,if your eye face with the computer for a long time,you may wear giasses in the future. As a student ,wo should opposse a correct attitude to the impact of Internet on interpersonal commmunication.We should actively use the convenience of the Internet ,and meanwhile take care for its disadvantage.
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