2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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With the development of economy,more and more people use cell phone.In China,as a biggest population country,there are almost everybody using cell phone .Why so many people use cell phone? This is because it is very convenient for us to use celle phone.However,there are some disadvantages.Everything have advantages and disadvantage. Nowadays,I find some bad phenomenones that people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see.It is very dangerous for us to use it in a wrong time.What's more ,overusing cell phone is bad for our eyes.For children, Overusing cell phone makes people delay their work and waste much time.Overusing cell phone will reduce communication with others.