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2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:41浏览次数:9791
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题目 On Excessive Packaging
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1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
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Today the phenomena of excessive packaging of goods become more popular,for the people online shopping continuous increase,a great number of goods are excessive pakaging People online shopping is not only convenient but is cheap as well,about some brittle goods prevent damage in the transport course ,they need to pack into several layer carton,even normal goods also need to pack into carton,apart from a few goods can not damage,the clothes need to put in plastic bag,people usually take the needless packaging throw away,so every year cause very large waste,and some of the packaging not belong renewable resources,they are burned down and will bring a great deal of pollution for our environment,our health will be effected So we should reduce use unnecessary packaging as possible as we could,for our environment do some contribution

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