高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文中学术词汇使用较少，但单词拼写做的很棒；文中句子偏简单，可增加从句使用量；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。

My hometown I was born in a small village.Though it's small and a little poor,I was proud of its pretty environment and nature.Lone before, I was took into the city to study and had to leave my lovely hometown. Graduating from the school,I went home happily.When I saw the village that is not the one before any more,I was shocked!Tall buildings are standing by and various sizes of cars are running in the street.I walked along the street,finding many trees cut down and steams dirtier.Factories has built and developed quickly.Suddenly,the beautiful rivers and green trees came to my mind.I felt sad. Why people have done this in my hometown even in other places?For money?For development?But why don't you think of the environment?It has been destroyed,maybe will never come back.It is not worthwhile to run economy.We should develop with economy-based.Now, it's our duty to protect the environment and the Earth.