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2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:37浏览次数:9584
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题目 My views on Online Shopping
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1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚  
2. 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题 
3. 我的建议 
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Today the network becomes more and more common,it is very popular that we are online shopping,on online shopping have lots of benefits,but it has some problem. In my opinion,my experience tell me that online shopping not only convenient,but rather cheap as well,it will save a great deal of time than traditional shopping,it's especially useful for some people who always busy with their work,for example,if you want to buy a dress online,first of all,you can search the same model on the other web,and then they will be compared,which is cheaper and better,you finally make a decision,but online shopping have one shortcoming,that is we can't touch the actual goods,we don't know the goods as good as the seller description,if you unluck,you will buy some bad goods,even though you want to send back,you also need to pay the express fee. To sum up,when we online shopping,we first read remark that have already bought the goods,then judge it is good or not ,after we had thought twice,finally make a purchase

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