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词汇表达不够丰富，要增加学术词汇的使用；熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。
The day my classmate got injured ,her feet can't move constantly ,The doctor said: if she want to recovery ,she need two month to rest.During the classmate got injured,Our classmates turn to care for her in hospital,Beause I am her good friends ,I go to the hospital every day.looking the care of classmates,I feel so moved.besides,Our teacher usually go to the hospital to teach her how to do homework,The teacher is patient,So we are both of like her.
