2013年5月16日雅思大作文真题:广告的副作用

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Advertising are helping ecomercial companies to develop their business through continuals catching people's eyes. Some people believe advertising become very important to their life while others own a neggative view on it. People who loves advertising because it plays an important in their daily life in terms of entertainment. Inserted in kinds of opera, most fun advertising just pull people from the story into a real relax scenery. We can't deny that there are many great advertise make us laugh long. Besides, during the adver skimming, people who shopping a lot can easily find the new product even new service they are interested in, which finally save money for consumers, cater their needs for enjoy living, also helps create many job vancacies for advertising professionals. Meanwhile, some people strongerly insist that the advertising affect their life on and on. The information provided by advertising sometimes is not true, which misleading comsumers to waste money on something they are not really need. Moreover, when people are focusing on their interested show on TV, they feel restless once intrerupted by the advertising. Last but not the least, some advertising contains more or less frames that influences the mind of children. Personally, i think the advantages bring by advertising are far outweight its disavantage. With the vivid intruductions of different commodities, people can find much fun instead of just re-see those meaningless soap opera.