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采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用。
Creating a green campus The school owns a green campus is very important,for it can provide a leisure place for the student,the student can sit below the tree shade that read the book and chat,they will feel very relaxed and pleasure,it also will cause air more fresh,and the school becomes more beautiful. If we want to Create a green campus that need all the students effort,it is not just a green environment,the campus create is bad or good ,it embodies the school's culture,a good culture is that every student would consciously protect their campus environment,even some of them would try their best to create it and make it becomes more beautiful and comfortable. whether student or teacher are both responsibility to create and protect their campus,they should not pick the leaf、Cut name on the trunk、Tread on the grass,etc,so the campus will become great charming
