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Dear friends, I am Beibei guides * * *, welcome to our tour of Beibei. Beibei district is a satellite town to the north of Chongqing City, garden city with rich cultural atmosphere, the famous scenic, abundant technical strength, beautiful and famous quartet. Beibei many mountains and beautiful water, is very rich in natural resources, water resources to one of the four largest tributary of the Yangtze River of the Jialing River in the area is the backbone of water. Tourism resources be richly endowed by nature, national Jinyun Mountain scenic area nine peaks stretches, the Yangtze River Basin is the preservation of a treasure trove of green better; North Springs Park water caves, allusions Liufang; Jialing River Small Three Gorges varied scenery, charm Tiancheng; gold knife gorge deep wall kurtosis, original beautiful; Motan River Cliff waterfall, spray condenser smoke. Tourism development potential is very great. Here I introduce the famous gold knife Gorge Scenic Area. Gold knife gorge is majestic, with gap with risks, to see Lin Xiu, in the rock that strange, water was quiet. Gold knife gorge is 9 kilometers long, is divided into two sections, the upper Karst because of geological action. Ground cutting strong, gold knife magic like formed unique Canyon Youhe stone, such as cut, two mountain Chaya, vertical height of more than 100 meters, on the Guteng Fuchsia, under the gurgling water, lower section due to water erosion, there are caves improve Tan Tan connected, cliffside waterfalls layers milk, clocks, stalagmites, stone is in different poses and with different expressions, called the ten in the nation's longest Canyon antique plank, amazing, with the stack probing, the feeling that contain in the natural landscape of the heavens and the earth, has developed seven km scenic line known as the male, odd, quiet, insurance. Collection of waterfalls, cave, gorge in one, there are Tibetan Dao Dong, the main attractions in the gorge natural beach, hanging over waterfalls, Eagle gorge, MI Le Buddha and other attractions for visitors to adventure, climbing and water recreation, summer vacation is the people, outing, return to nature tourism nirvana. Tourists as the "dream of the Shangri-La", "China first insurance gorge"...... Seeing is believing, 100 see not personally experience. Want to feel more, see more, friends, don't hesitate, come quickly, welcome to our Beibei hot pillow, beautiful scenery waiting for you to enjoy the delicious Chongqing Hot pot, waiting for you to taste, here you will regret it.
