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2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:33浏览次数:1998
要求:
1、近十年来某城市越来越多人选择出去旅游 
2、出现这种现象的原因 

3、这种现象可能产生的影响 

表格:

1995   2000  2005 
1万人   近4万 12万以上 

用户的作文(系统评分84.5分
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拼写做的很棒,学术词汇可适量增加;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。

用户练习作文:

As the above formate describing, the number of people who choose to travel recently 10 years are in sharp increasing.We guys prefer going somewhere twice a year to open our horizon and plus our knowledge. "I was going to climb mountain with friends last year.How is an interesting and activating thing." "There are always many troubles in our travel experience. When I show great courage to confront with problems,I can feel how strong am I." Many factors are actually responsible for this phenomenon. For one thing, with the development of economy we have to endure much more work pressure and do more things. We should find the relaxing thing to get rid of the burden. For another, It's the time that we have the enough consume capacity. Nothing is importance than touching the fresh to meet our curiosity. As my personal perspective, the travel brings us harvest a lot.

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