小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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My new teacher is from jiangxi, she is a girl. She loves to smile, and she is very tender. She eyes are very big, nose is very tall, skin is very white. When I feel disappoinment, she always courage me.All of my classmetes love her very much, she likes a sisiter to take care us.why you suddenly use english, you confused me, you can speak english with me