小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意文中的句子错误；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

My new teacher is from jiangxi, she is a girl. She loves to smile, and she is very tender. She eyes are very big,the nose very tall, skin very white. When I feel disappointment, she always courage me.All of my classmates love her very much, she likes a sister to take care us.why you suddenly use english, you confused me, you can speak english with me