小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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My new teacher is from jiangxi, she is a girl. She loves to smile, and she is very tender. Her eyes are very big and the nose is very tall, skin is very white. When I disappoint, she always encourages me.All of my classmates love her very much, she likes a sister to take care us. When I graduated form school, i saw her so few times.