2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题（5）写作：美丽海南岛

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Last winter vacation, I went to Hainan Island which is the second largest island in our country. The weather was warm and comfortable. The air was fresh and sunshine was bright all day. Living in this kind place made me relaxing and engergetic. Along the beautiful beach, I could see a lot of tall and straight cocont palm trees. And the baverage of these coconut were cool and fresh. It was very cheap to buy myself a local drink and sucked by the beach. Swimming freely here or touching the sand is something the visitors must do. But I enjoyed boating with my parents and watched them fishing patiently. After all these fun activites, my parents and I found a nice restaurant to try some declicious seafoods. They were cheap and fresh. What an unforgettable trip I have ever had.