2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题（5）写作：美丽海南岛

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中学术词汇的使用需加强，另外要注意词汇拼写的检查；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Last winter vacation, I went to Hainan Island which is the second largest island in our country. The weather there was warm and comfortable. The air was fresh and sunshine was bright all day. Living in this kind place made me relaxing and engergetic. It was such a beautiful place that we would see and do a lot of things. Along the beautiful beach, I could see a lot of tall and straight cocont palm trees. And the baverage of these coconut were cool and fresh. It was very cheap to buy myself a local drink and sucked by the beach. Swimming freely here or touching the sand is something the visitors must do. But I enjoyed boating with my parents and watched them fishing on the sea. The sea was different at different time of the time. I just appreciated the beautiful views from different angers and used my cameras to record all these great moments. After all these fun activites, we were tired and hunry. My parents and I found a nice restaurant to try some declicious seafoods. They were cheap and fresh. I could almost taste the sea. What an unforgettable trip I have ever had.