小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

My new teacher is from jiangxi, she is a girl. She loves to smile ,and she is very tender. Her eyes are very big and the nose is very tall, skin is very white. When I disappoint, she always encourages me.All of my classmates love her very much, she likes a sister to take care us. When I graduated from school, I saw her so few times. I know she married and has a son.Her family is very happy.But the life lasted for a very short time, there was an incident happened to her.