2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题（5）写作：美丽海南岛

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇基础不错，但学术词汇量还要多多积累；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Last winter vacation, I went to Hainan Island which is the second largest island in our country. The weather there was warm and comfortable. The air was fresh and sunshine was bright all day. Living in this kind place made me relaxing and engergetic. It was such a beautiful place that we could see and do a lot of things. Along the beautiful beach, I could see a lot of tall and straight cocont palm trees. And the baverage of these coconut were cool and fresh. It was very cheap to buy myself a local drink and sucked by the beach. Swimming freely here or touching the sand is something the visitors must do. But I am not good at swimming. I saw people coming from all over the country enjoyed their voacations. Some kids built the sandcastle witht he help of their parents. But it was pity to see they were washed away by the wave becasue they were too close to the sea. As for me, I enjoyed boating with my parents and watched them fishing on the sea. The sea was different at different time of the day. I just appreciated the beautiful views from different angers and used my cameras to record all these great moments. After all these fun activites, we were tired and hunry. My parents and I found a nice restaurant to try some declicious seafoods. They were cheap and fresh. I could almost taste the sea. What an unforgettable trip I have ever had.