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Hainan Island is in the south part of our country. On Island Hainan, you could enjoy bright sunshine, fresh air and beautiful scenery. You will never forget that. Hai Kou city is the capital of Hainan Province while it is also the biggest city on the island. There, you could either go to visit the flower markets or enjoy the delicious seafood. There, you could find many beautiful beaches. People love walking along the seaside or swimming in the sea. There are many tall coconut palm trees to see. Welcome to Hainan Island! I’m sure you will have a good time there.