小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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My new teacher is from jiangxi, she is a girl. She loves to smile,and she is very tender. Her eyes are very big and the nose is very tall, skin is very white. When I disappoint, she always encourages me.All of my classmates love her very much, she likes a sister to take care us. When I graduated from school, I saw her so few times. I know she married and has a son.Her family is very happy.But the life lasted for a very short time, there was an incident occur to her. Her son got sick.It took considerably money to cure it.Unfortunately her son deceased eventually. She felt extremely sad and she sobbed every day.When I went to visit her, I found she looked very bad.