Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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my schoolAny subject of study needs justification: its advocates must explain why it is worth attention. Most popular subjects like technology and economics attract lots of people, simply because they make it much easier for students to land a job while majors like history are not that lucky in job hunting. However, learning history is indeed beneficial for everyone.