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2008年6月21日英语四级作文真题:互联网

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:11浏览次数:2270
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Internet. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 
1. 有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率 
2. 还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷,进而影响学习 
3. 你对于网络的看法
用户的作文(系统评分72.0分
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熟练的使用了从句和复杂句;文章层次较为清晰;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇。

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Impact of internet In an era of internet develop rapidly,people can employ it do a great many things,they can employ it study、Shopping、Reserve ticket etc,but people easily disturbed by inconnected information. When we open the web page,it would appear that lots of advertisement ,some sales advertisements we hardly difficult judge which is good or not,even some people are cheated,a great many of teenagers are attracted by online game,when they are no sooner open the internet than would appeal advertisement of online game,for the teenager of restrain ability have a little weak,they are soon attracted,some of them would not control theirselve that play online game,it would affect their study,even appear a phenomena is that some of them drop out,it cause some harm for teenager,in addition,it make their parent feel very annoyanced. In my view,we should manage to better utilize the internet,we can save useful web page to get rid of irrelevant information,as long as we just need to obtain benefit knowledge.

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