小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Good Friend I have a good friend , her name is Peach. Peach is a very beautiful and smart girl, she study very hard. After school, she like reading books, listening songs and doing some sport excerses . What's more she is also a good kid to her parents, she always help her mother to do some house work. I like her very much. We have a deal that we will be friend forever.