小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My friend's name is Yu,she come from Yunnan province of china.She is thin and she has long hairs.Two big eyes in her little face.I like she very much,because she is kind extremely. I always stay with she,when class is over,we often go to a small shop to buy some food.