2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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In my hometown,many mountains are around my hometown.Specially,There stand a tower at the top of the high mountain.It is not unusual for us to visit the tower. If time permitting,we should climbing the mountain.During this time,not only we challenge our ability,but also we can look a beautiful view.For example,much tender grasses,much colorful flowers,sorts of trees.Then,there are sorts of animal.Such as,dogs,cats,birds,snakes and butterflies.At the tower,there are many status.Many people are stared at this figure,the figure are extremely joyful and beautiful. It is worthwhile for you to visit the tower.