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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12941
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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建议作者增加过程性词汇的使用;句式灵活多变,再加强从句的使用会更棒;文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高,学术词汇的积累上也要再接再厉;请注意分段。

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Electronic communication With the development of technology ,the way of life have obtained a great change. Such as the above picture of two parents through the email, which one of the techonlogy product, to communicate with their son and it's not to imagine that they must haven't seen their son for a long time ,so miss him very much . Of course we have to admit that the development of technology have made our life more convince.But ,in many ways , it also

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