小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a best friend,she name is yaoyao,she is very beautiful.she has a white face,big eyes,red mouth,long and black hair.she is taller than me,I think she also more beauty than me.I like she very much,our relationship is very well.we always go to school,after school,eat lunch,play together.she like eat,almost is junk food,but she know that the things she eat are bad for herself.