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文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。
Is it too late to save our earth?Some negative people hold this viewpoint that whatever our human do to improve the environment,it cannot come to effect because it is too late now.Is that true,is the world so bad that we cannot save it?Somebody may have opposed opinion,for them,if we really choised effective method to save the earth,our world would become wonderful again. I think that the negative opinion is no valid for it ignores the possible improvement of the world.And I cannot agree with the positive people neither,because they fail to pay attention to the fact that human work for short-term interests generally,so they may not did anything to improve the environment. So in my opinion, we should not keep both opinions.Although the pollution is very severe,we can do something to change it.However the changes depend on our human ultimately.Only if we really do something,we can see the changes.
