雅思写作范文:父母应该多陪孩子

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There are growing numbers two-career families, which leads to less time shared by parents and their kids. This trend results a hot debate this phenomenon is good for the development of kids or not Some say that it do merits for kids, but more individuals are on the side of disagreeable group. From my side of view, reducing family time would have more advise effects on their children. Some say that parents could use more time to own more money, which could be used to improve living and studying environment, such as more digital instruments and more nutrition.what is more, they can have more time to study as they could take advantage of the time which was supposed to spend with their parents. In a word, less time between parents and their kids could have benefits for the family. However, the opposite think that it has more demerits. Firstly, the family tie is loose, which could lead to seperating family members emotionally. some kids, who confront some issues, do not turn to their family and may lead to suicide, as emotional support sometimes is more important that finacial support. Secondly, some kid may use the time to do other things like playing game on Internet instead of studying or improving their skills for future. Spending time with parents could help them to develop social skills, which is a treasure for children in the future. Generally speaking, spending time together with your kids are good for them which could supply emotional support and improve their social skills. To conclude, parents not only give birth to their children but also need to nurture them. they are the anchors on the of their children growth, giving them emotional support and acting as teachers in their future life. Therefore, parents should spend more time with their children.