2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I would like to take her to Tianyige to see a large number of books from several hundred years .I think there are much gold in books,we must know the importance of good books. And in my opinion ,the books in Tianyige are rural .Books carry our ancestors wit and are worth to reading .So I think I would like to take her to Tianyige.