2004年考研英语作文真题:终点又是起点

拼写做的很棒，学术词汇可适量增加；可适当增加从句的使用；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。

From the drawing above, we can see that a girl is going to arrive at the destination, while it's also a new beginning for her. The meaning conveyed by the drawing is most thought-provoking. When we attain our goal, that's not means we can stop moving, for there is a long way for us to search and explore. While as, it's necessary for us to take a rest, then, we start again rather than addicting to the success. After resting, we ought to consist to pursuit the next destination. During this time, we should be passion and patience, resitance the loneness. It's inevitable to meet lots of troubles, but no matter what happened, we shouldn't give up, until we attain the next goal. Take myself as an example, when I was a high-school student, my destination was an outstanding university, so I worked hard for this around the clock. Now, I am a junior, the next year I would graduate from university, getting a decent job turns into my major objective.