单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;文中衔接词丰富;能够简单运用一些从句;请注意分段。
To be honest,I would like to take her to Tianyige to see a large number of books.Anyway,I think there are much gold in books,so we must know the importance of good books which can help us become better. In my opinion,the books in Tianyige are rural.On the other hand,books carry our ancestors‘s wit and are worth reading.So I think I would like to take her to Tianyige.