单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;如果增加些复杂句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章层次较为清晰;请注意分段。
To be honest,I would like to take her to Tianyige to see a large number of books.Anyway,I think there are much gold in books.So we must know the importance of good books which can help us become better. In my opinion,the books in Tianyige are rural.On the other hand,books carry our ancestors‘s wit and are worth reading.So I think I would like to take her to Tianyige.