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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71619
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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To be honest,I would like to take her to Tianyige to see a large number of books.Anyway,I think there are much gold in books.So we must know the importance of good books which can help us become better. In my opinion,the books in Tianyige are rural.On the other hand,books carry our ancestors‘s wit and are worth reading.So I think I would like to take her to Tianyige.

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