2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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To be honest,I would like to take her to Tianyige to see a large number of books.Anyway,I think there are many things we need to learn in books.So we must know the importance of good books which can help us become better. In my opinion,the books in Tianyige are rural.On the other hand,books carry our ancestors‘s wit and are worth reading.So I think I would like to take her to Tianyige.