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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71668
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;文章层次较为清晰。

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To be honest,I would like to take her to Tianyige to see a large number of books in Tianyige. Anyway,I think there are so many things we need to absorb in books.So we must clear the importance of good books which can aid us become better and better. In my opinion,the books in Tianyige are rural.On the other hand,books carry our ancestors‘ wit and are well worth reading.So I think I prefer to take her to Tianyige.

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