采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;文中的句子基本没有错误,可适当将文中短句合并为长句;文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错。
To be honest,I would like to take her to Tianyige to see a large number of books in Tianyige. Anyway,I think there are so many things we need to absorb in books.So we must clear the importance of good books which can help us become better and better. In my opinion,the books in Tianyige are rural.On the other hand,books carry our ancestors‘ wit and are well worth reading which is why I think I prefer to take her to Tianyige.