采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错。
To be honest,I would like to take her to Tianyige to go and have a look of the miraculous number of books in Tianyige. Anyway,I think there are so many things we need to absorb in books,which makes us must clear the importance of good books which can help us become better and better. In my proposal,the books in Tianyige are pretty rural.On the other hand,books carry our ancestors‘ wit and are well worth reading which is why I think I prefer to take her to Tianyige.