采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是学术词汇的积累。
To be honest,I would like to take her to Tianyige to go and have a total look of the great number of literatures in Tianyige. Anyway,I think there are so many things we need to absorb in books,which makes us must clear the importance of good books which can help us become better and better. In my proposal,the books in Tianyige are pretty rural.On the other hand,books carry our ancestors‘ wit and are well worth reading which is why I think I prefer to take her to Tianyige.