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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71668
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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To be honest,I would like to take her to Tianyige to go and have a total look of the grand number of literatures in Tianyige. Anyway,I think there are so many things we need to absorb in books,which makes us must clear the importance of nice books which can help us become better and better. In my proposal,the literature in Tianyige are pretty rural.On the other hand,books carry our ancestors‘ wit and are well worth reading which is why I think I prefer to lead her to Tianyige.

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