采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强。
To be honest,I would like to take her to Tianyige to go and have a total look of the grand number of literatures in Tianyige. Anyway,I think there are so many things we need to absorb in books,which makes us must clear the importance of nice books which can help us become better and better. In my proposal,literature in Tianyige are fairly rural.Additionally,works carry our ancestors‘ wit and are well worth reading which is why I think I prefer to lead her to Tianyige.