2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；从句使用稍显不足，注意个别句子错误；文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇使用较丰富，但拼写检查要重视。

At present, with more and more vehicles nevigating on the road, wity dwellers are daily confronted and plagued by traffic congestion. Some people suggest that the best way to tackle the traffic problems is to provide free transportation for 24/7 service. However, I deeply doubt the availability and believe that more measures are required to solve the problems. Admittedly, it is convenience that the biggest advantage offered by free public transport service, especially for those employees who go to work on weekends or at midnight. As a result, more people are captivated and they choose bus and underground as their daily tool, which drastically reduce the number of personal cars running on the roads. On the other hand, it seems that a kind of waste of public service out of the rush hour, because few people would use the public transport at a late night or in the very early morning. Furthermore, a large sum of money is required to support this free public transport system, which definitely put more strains on the government. Thus, the government would certainly resort to tax revenue, which means that residents are likely to pay more taxes to the government and suffer a heavy financial burden. From my perspectives, it is essencial and necessary to develop and advance the public transport system. Moreover, improvement of the city-planning can also reduce the traffic congestion. To conclude, providing free 24/7 service is not available to solve the problem.