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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8979
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分74.5分
评语:

文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;文中学术词汇使用较丰富,但是拼写错误比较多。

用户练习作文:

There is an old saying that people never judge a book from its cover. From my point of view, this saying also applies to our attitudes towards others: never judge a person from their appearance. Because you never know one person’s true meritsif only judging from their appearance。   It is true that an attractive appearance is of great significance not only fordaily life but also for the job. However, it is unwise to judge one person by the appearance for the following reasons. On the one hand, with the advancementof science technology and medical level, people can transform their surface byall means. On the other hand, the appearance should not be the merely criteriafor judging an individual, considering that are more important factors,including Courteous, kind-hearted, honest and so on。   In conclusion, it is unadvisable to judge a person by their appearance. That’s whyI assert that we should pay more attention to one's inward and place high valueon inner cultivation。

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