小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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i have a good teacher.she is very kind for every student.she has long hair and she often wears sweet smile in her beautiful face.and she always treat us as her own kids.everyone of our class is very happy to be her student.under the encourage of her,i am getting more and more confident.