2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

文中词汇表达多样性不足，在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累；可适当增加从句和长句的使用；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。

It's very foolish that when you see or hear something, you get conclusion at once. This is because what we see or hear, is only a part of the whole thing. You can't judge one thing through only a little. Moreover, you may think it as something you have know. You may use your experience to get all. Thus, when you get some information, you should hold on your brain. Then try to know more about it such as ask the person who is related to it. Therefore, before doing, you should think a lot.