小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My friend is very caut and very buidefuil.I'm very love her .So she is my very good friend .My good friend is friendly so she have many good friend,but me and she is very very good friend.My claas many pepoup love she .she name is Lisa I it is my good friend.