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As we all know that many parents do all things for their children. For example, when their children go to school, they will drive cars to take them to school.Sometimes little kids want to buy something unuseful,but their parents nerve refuse them and buy these for them.These are bad situations. In my opinion,to solve these problems.Our parents should think what to do and how to do to help their children to be independent.First, when their children were little,they can teach them to do some things by themselves.Such as going to school by themselves,learning to cook and to wash. Do you have any good ideas about how should parents help children to be independent.Please tell us.