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2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:28浏览次数:5525
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题目 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
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1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……
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As we all know that many parents do all things for their children. For example, when their children go to school, they will drive cars to take them to school.Sometimes little kids want to buy something unuseful,but their parents nerve refuse them and buy these for them.These are bad situations. In my opinion,to solve these problems.Our parents should think what to do and how to do to help their children to be independent.First, when their children were little,they can teach them to do some things by themselves.Such as going to school by themselves,learning to cook and to wash. Do you have any good ideas about how should parents help children to be independent.Please tell us.

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